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DETAILS = READER RESPECT

6/17/2021

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Photo of the word A reluctant farewell from reader to writer. (Photo courtesy of Kate Cox, Pixabay.com)


​Dear Writer,

You’ve lost me.

Forget my copyeditor training; I’m also a reader. Besides, the main job of a copyeditor is to stand in for readers, preemptively eliminating glitches and gaps that break the reading flow.

But you, earnest scribe, don’t seem to realize how closely readers follow your words or how quickly we stumble. Small inconsistencies catapult us out of your universe and into a space where we stop reading to think about your writing. That’s not a good place to send any reader.

Your shrugging over details that seem inconsequential can quickly tip the delicate balance of the unspoken contract between writers and readers. You don’t think those little things matter? Wrong. At the very least, they add up.

We have many reading choices. Too many, actually. If you won’t keep us immersed in your story or message, we’ll turn to a writer who does.

Hollywood films used to rely on the skills of continuity editors. I’m not sure who fills that role these days, and for some films I doubt it’s anyone. But continuity is as important for the written word as it is on the screen. And its absence shows.

In the theater, suspension of disbelief collapses when the bullet hole appears before the shot is fired or the family dog shrinks—without the help of magic or chemistry—by the end of a scene. And readers fall off the page with a thud when government offices are fully staffed on an ordinary weekend afternoon, when given someone’s job description for the third time, or when introduced to a person or an idea that adds nothing to the story at that point—not even entertainment value—and is never mentioned again.

Our memories and powers of observation aren’t that poor.

Picky? You bet. Because watching a film and reading aren’t just about being transported to another’s imagination; they’re also sensemaking experiences. Whatever the reality that viewers and readers are invited to enter, it must play by the rules of the microcosm portrayed—whether fictional or factual. And like a pixel, every small element builds the overall image. When one tiny piece is off, the picture doesn’t make sense.

Can you be your own continuity editor? Yes, and you should be. The entire structure of your written piece hangs together via consistency of time, people, place, and argument. Fiction or nonfiction, internal logic must carry through.

I’m in awe of the creativity you bring to your ideas, and I appreciate that you may be among the many writers who pound out first drafts to capture concepts in any way possible. But eventually there must come a draft when Those Who Write for Readers become analytical and detail oriented—regardless of inherent personality traits or comfort level. Resistance only signals writing immaturity.

If you want to win me back, then prepare to roll up your sleeves and head into the weeds, carrying some of the crucial tools of your trade—which requires that you find, adapt, or create systems for organization.


  • Educate yourself on the style guide and the dictionary considered best practice for your type of writing. Then use them.
 
  • Maintain a list of significant people in your piece or book, including name spellings, nicknames, descriptions, and relationships.
 
  • Build an alphabetized word list for consistency in spellings and capitalization.
 
  • Keep a time line that summarizes key events or ideas chronologically.
 
  • Whether writing fiction or non, track point of view within and across scenes or sections.
 
            Whatever your genre, study the nuances of POV and transitions. Please don’t disorient readers with
            dizzying point-of-view switches. Hopping from one perspective to another gives us whiplash. (You can
            quickly read about some of the basics, but Google and Amazon provide a wealth of in-depth
            resources on POV in fiction and nonfiction writing.)
 
  • Whether writing fiction or non, track verb tenses within and across scenes or sections.  Please don’t disorient readers with dizzying tense switches. (I’m looking at you, Richard Osman. I love The Thursday Murder Club for so many reasons, and I hate the way you randomly zigzag tenses within a few lines. So disconcerting.)
 
            Do you know when and why you’re using present tense, past tense, present perfect tense, past
            perfect tense, and future perfect tense? Even if you can’t remember the terminology, you ought to
            understand the form and function of each. You’re a writer. You must master your instruments. (You
            can quickly scan my virtual bookshelf for several of my grammar favorites, but Google and Amazon
            provide a wealth of resources on how to use tense well.)
 
  • Read and revise your drafts multiple times, looking for different types of issues in each revision stage—and make sure that one of your early reads is for logic, continuity, consistency, and all the little things readers will notice even though you might wish they wouldn’t.
 
            And for the love of Pete, if you’re going to have your work copyedited and proofread, finish those
            continuity revisions first.
 
Remember, the lost can be found. I’m rooting for the reclamation of your work, because I truly want to like your writing. Once you start showing care for the pesky details, I’ll anticipate finding myself lost in the magic of your words.
 
Meanwhile, I choose the writer whose careful, invisible consistency keeps me in their world.
​
With hope for next time,
 
Reader Ranee
 
Which type of detail derails your reading? In the comments below, please share the little thing you wish writers would pay more attention to.

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Elizabeth Gauffreau link
6/17/2021 04:53:15 pm

Hi, Ranee,

I was thinking we were about due to see a new post from you! When I saw the title of your post, I thought it was going to be along the lines of what I learned in my first fiction workshop about the essential contract with the reader:

Thou shalt not end thy story with, "And then I woke up. It had all been a dream."

-or-

"My name is King. I am a German Shepherd."

I know just what you mean about continuity errors. I am always afraid of making them. I already have two timelines and a calendar going for my current work-in-progress. The character bios are next.

How is your writing life these days?

Liz

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Ranee Tomlin link
6/17/2021 05:31:48 pm

Nice of you to read and comment, Liz!

Your having and using an organizational system puts you far ahead of the game, and I'm glad (but not surprised) to learn that you respect readers by paying attention to consistency-related details.

There are several aspects to the contract between the writer and the reader, and your two examples gave me a reminder and a good laugh. Thanks!

My writing life is barely there. I keep experimenting with various genres and haven't yet found the subject matter and form that motivate me to keep going with anything I try. I appreciate your asking, though, and look forward to learning more about your current work.

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